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     You Said

 

by Keith Nelson

 

 

You Said

 

You have beautiful blue eyes

I said

They are nothing

         compared to the lumosity of your smile.

 

You said

 

It is so easy to listen to your voice

So I said, but that is nothing

    compared to the smooth

endless ripples of your spoken and unspoken meanings

          rolling up on my shore.

 

You said

 

Your love of life

sparks my enthusiasm

         inflames my curiosity

So, wordless, I leaped up

         tail                       flashing

                                             like a deer

         settled you astride my back

And away we bounded

         into unexplored chasms

         of the wide, wild world.

 

You said

 

I have always taken my time

         to pause, to quietly absorb paintings

But now, when I go with you

         I am drawn so close

         I lie on the canvas behind the paint

                  see, feel smell the brushstrokes

                  as a soft quilt over me.

 

Yes, Yes, I say, I cherish that.

And every painter knows

         How much colors and shapes

         and emotions shift

                  with all that surrounds them.

Your sensitivity and vitality

         surround me, over and over

                  newly painting the landscapes of my life.

 

You said

 

Never before have I laughed

   so often, so deeply

         as I do with you

Ha Ha I say, that is nothing

         in comparison with the hilarity,

         the parades of wild laughing cavorting  rock-hopping penguins

                  the snowboarding swordfish

Your humor steers my way.

 

        

You said,

 

Truly I must say

          I have come so deeply to love your every move and gesture  and concern.

 

And I said, Well that is so perfect, because I feel precisely the same about you.

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